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Post by random on Sept 18, 2007 6:50:29 GMT -5
Let's see how many warrior poets we have out there..
a standard haiku is written in three unrhymed lines of seventeen syllables distributed throughout the lines in successions of five, seven and five.
so five syllables seven syllables and then five more syllables
or something like this:
the door has closed, with its handle loosed in my palm i am left without
Just write the random haiku for our viewing pleasure or leave a random topic for others to tackle.
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Post by pepper on Sept 18, 2007 8:35:43 GMT -5
I name this
my 1st emo haiku
milky white and numb for lost many years ago cast away my mind
puppy
eyes to melt your heart an unconditional love for you, my owner
I never knew I could write such rubbish!
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 18, 2007 9:06:13 GMT -5
OK here is my first try:
Dawn
Good morning lover. Waking to your smile completes, my heart beats again.
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nico
New Member
*lurks*
Posts: 8
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Post by nico on Sept 18, 2007 14:15:43 GMT -5
my coffee is cold it makes me feel all emo where will the pain end?
*empties the dryer* *puts away all the laundry* *lather rinse repeat*
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 18, 2007 15:39:23 GMT -5
*Steal my breath love, I cannot stand anymore. You have captured me. * *The lost remain here. I will stay wanting, waiting. When will you follow?* *I see the warm sun setting behind clouds of gray look my way again.* Ok dangit I am hooked.
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Post by random on Sept 18, 2007 15:43:04 GMT -5
gaze into my eyes let me feel your warm embrace stay rest awhile
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Post by random on Sept 18, 2007 15:56:19 GMT -5
falling, catch my breath my world spins out of control yet her voice calms me
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 18, 2007 16:01:40 GMT -5
Big blue eyes laughing Many questions in one day My son, my mirror
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 18, 2007 16:10:07 GMT -5
The sound soothes my ears I turn to find your sweet face Cruel trick of my mind
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Post by random on Sept 18, 2007 16:12:52 GMT -5
a fleeting moment for that i would drive halfway cross the 'verse and back
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Post by batman on Sept 18, 2007 16:17:07 GMT -5
I can't write Haiku I am very talented Not so much at this
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 18, 2007 16:23:49 GMT -5
Tick tock sounds the clock Passing moments race to win back your heart once more
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Post by random on Sept 18, 2007 16:27:33 GMT -5
the aroma was exquisite in her garden like a dream waking
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 19, 2007 11:05:59 GMT -5
A wall erected By words I could not catch Where is my safe place?
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Post by andrea1018 on Sept 19, 2007 11:48:49 GMT -5
My stomach turning, a cold I cannot escape. It hurts to breathe.
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